From a3abfb7510ce74512e1ee7ecd7ed614adebb6a32 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Evgenii Kozlov <enklave.mare.balticum@protonmail.com>
Date: Mon, 17 Mar 2025 22:49:10 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] DROID-3448 Onboarding | Enhancement | Wording updates (#2166)

---
 .../signup/OnboardingMnemonicPhraseScreen.kt   | 18 ++++++++++++++++--
 .../signup/OnboardingSetProfileNameScreen.kt   |  2 +-
 localization/src/main/res/values/strings.xml   | 12 +++++++-----
 3 files changed, 24 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/app/src/main/java/com/anytypeio/anytype/ui/onboarding/screens/signup/OnboardingMnemonicPhraseScreen.kt b/app/src/main/java/com/anytypeio/anytype/ui/onboarding/screens/signup/OnboardingMnemonicPhraseScreen.kt
index f313929563..0244035470 100644
--- a/app/src/main/java/com/anytypeio/anytype/ui/onboarding/screens/signup/OnboardingMnemonicPhraseScreen.kt
+++ b/app/src/main/java/com/anytypeio/anytype/ui/onboarding/screens/signup/OnboardingMnemonicPhraseScreen.kt
@@ -84,6 +84,20 @@ fun PreviewMnemonicPhraseScreen() {
     )
 }
 
+@Preview
+@Composable
+fun PreviewMnemonicPhraseScreen2() {
+    val fakeMnemonic = "One Two Three Four Five Six Seven Eight Nine Ten Eleven Twelve"
+    MnemonicPhraseScreen(
+        state = OnboardingMnemonicViewModel.State.Mnemonic(fakeMnemonic),
+        reviewMnemonic = { /*TODO*/ },
+        onCheckLaterClicked = { /*TODO*/ },
+        copyMnemonicToClipboard = {},
+        mnemonicColorPalette = emptyList(),
+        onGoToAppClicked = {}
+    )
+}
+
 @OptIn(ExperimentalMaterial3Api::class)
 @Composable
 fun MnemonicPhraseScreen(
@@ -190,7 +204,7 @@ fun MnemonicButtons(
                     textAlign = TextAlign.Center
                 )
                 OnBoardingButtonPrimary(
-                    text = stringResource(id = R.string.onboarding_show_my_key),
+                    text = stringResource(id = R.string.onboarding_tap_to_reveal),
                     modifier = Modifier
                         .fillMaxWidth()
                         .padding(horizontal = 16.dp),
@@ -199,7 +213,7 @@ fun MnemonicButtons(
                     }, size = ButtonSize.Large
                 )
                 OnBoardingButtonSecondary(
-                    text = stringResource(id = R.string.onboarding_key_skip),
+                    text = stringResource(id = R.string.onboarding_key_not_now),
                     modifier = Modifier
                         .fillMaxWidth()
                         .padding(
diff --git a/app/src/main/java/com/anytypeio/anytype/ui/onboarding/screens/signup/OnboardingSetProfileNameScreen.kt b/app/src/main/java/com/anytypeio/anytype/ui/onboarding/screens/signup/OnboardingSetProfileNameScreen.kt
index 2a3c6e5612..42f3e43dc0 100644
--- a/app/src/main/java/com/anytypeio/anytype/ui/onboarding/screens/signup/OnboardingSetProfileNameScreen.kt
+++ b/app/src/main/java/com/anytypeio/anytype/ui/onboarding/screens/signup/OnboardingSetProfileNameScreen.kt
@@ -191,7 +191,7 @@ fun SetProfileNameNextButton(
     val focus = LocalFocusManager.current
     Box(modifier = modifier) {
         OnBoardingButtonPrimary(
-            text = stringResource(id = R.string.onboarding_get_my_key_button_text),
+            text = stringResource(id = R.string.done),
             onClick = {
                 onNextClicked(text.value).also {
                     focus.clearFocus(force = true)
diff --git a/localization/src/main/res/values/strings.xml b/localization/src/main/res/values/strings.xml
index 722ee7296f..148cab8b6a 100644
--- a/localization/src/main/res/values/strings.xml
+++ b/localization/src/main/res/values/strings.xml
@@ -1113,18 +1113,20 @@
     <string name="onboarding_terms_and_policy_terms">Terms\u00A0of\u00A0Use</string>
     <string name="onboarding_terms_and_policy_infix">" and "</string>
     <string name="onboarding_terms_and_policy_privacy">Privacy\u00A0Policy</string>
-    <string name="onboarding_new_vault_button_text">New vault</string>
+    <string name="onboarding_new_vault_button_text">I am new here</string>
     <string name="onboarding_enter_my_vault">Enter my Vault</string>
-    <string name="onboarding_have_key_button_text">I have a Key</string>
+    <string name="onboarding_have_key_button_text">Already have a Key</string>
     <string name="onboarding_get_my_key_button_text">Get my Key</string>
     <string name="onboarding_invite_code_title">Enter your invite code</string>
     <string name="onboarding_invite_code_description">If you don\'t have one just go to anytype.io\nand sign up to the waiting list.</string>
     <string name="onboarding_void_title">This is your Void</string>
     <string name="onboarding_void_description">It is an encrypted location for everything you create. Everything is stored on your device, and backed up to the distributed network.</string>
     <string name="onboarding_this_is_your_key_title">This is your Key</string>
-    <string name="onboarding_key_description">It gives you full ownership over your vault. It cannot be recovered.</string>
+    <string name="onboarding_key_description">It gives you full ownership over your vault.</string>
     <string name="onboarding_show_my_key">Show my Key</string>
+    <string name="onboarding_tap_to_reveal">Tap to Reveal</string>
     <string name="onboarding_key_skip">Skip</string>
+    <string name="onboarding_key_not_now">Not now</string>
     <string name="onboarding_key_copy">Copy to clipboard</string>
     <string name="onboarding_set_your_name_title">Set your name</string>
     <string name="onboarding_soul_creation_description">Only seen by people you share something with. There is no central registry of these names.</string>
@@ -1135,8 +1137,8 @@
     <string name="onboarding_entering_void_title">Entering the Void</string>
     <string name="onboarding_your_key_can_t_be_empty">Your Key can\'t be empty</string>
 
-    <string name="onboarding_mnemonic_read_more">Read more</string>
-    <string name="onboarding_key_additional_info">You can find this key later in Anytype settings</string>
+    <string name="onboarding_mnemonic_read_more">Read more about Key</string>
+    <string name="onboarding_key_additional_info">You can find this key later in app settings</string>
     <string name="onboarding_what_is_the_key">What is the Key?</string>
     <string name="onboarding_recovery_phrase_description">It is represented by a recovery phrase – 12 random words from which your vault is magically generated on this device.</string>
     <string name="onboarding_recovery_phrase_description_2">Whomever knows the combination of these words owns your vault. </string>